Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.4.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.4.rst
index 485c820db6121d00312f7f0b02c8a52b89fde277..94a7d6f261e29964350db584a5dc0511ad2ec0b7 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.4.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.4.rst
@@ -15,16 +15,17 @@ Notes for BIND 9.18.4
 Feature Changes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Some more ``dnssec-policy`` configuration checks have been added to
-  detect weird policies such as missing KSK and/or ZSK, and too short
-  key lifetimes and re-sign periods. :gl:`#1611`.
+- New ``dnssec-policy`` configuration checks have been added to detect
+  unusual policies, such as missing KSK and/or ZSK and too-short key
+  lifetimes and re-sign periods. :gl:`#1611`
 
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Key files were updated every time the ``dnssec-policy`` key manager ran,
-  whether the metadata has changed or not. BIND now checks if changes were
-  applied before writing out the key files. :gl:`#3302`.
+- Key files were updated every time the ``dnssec-policy`` key manager
+  ran, whether the metadata had changed or not. :iscman:`named` now
+  checks whether changes were applied before writing out the key files.
+  :gl:`#3302`
 
 - DNSSEC-signed catalog zones were not being processed correctly. This
-  has been fixed. :gl:`#3380`.
+  has been fixed. :gl:`#3380`