]> git.ipfire.org Git - thirdparty/bind9.git/commitdiff
grammer, spelling and clarity
authorMark Andrews <marka@isc.org>
Wed, 17 May 2006 01:33:29 +0000 (01:33 +0000)
committerMark Andrews <marka@isc.org>
Wed, 17 May 2006 01:33:29 +0000 (01:33 +0000)
doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml

index bdc0fd1c9ac7218e0d8cd68fd3acb36dc6fb075b..b2adc3b85d500006f9c7e568532cb8bb1d8e192b 100644 (file)
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
  - PERFORMANCE OF THIS SOFTWARE.
 -->
 
-<!-- File: $Id: Bv9ARM-book.xml,v 1.241.18.58 2006/05/16 06:43:06 marka Exp $ -->
+<!-- File: $Id: Bv9ARM-book.xml,v 1.241.18.59 2006/05/17 01:33:29 marka Exp $ -->
 <book xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude">
   <title>BIND 9 Administrator Reference Manual</title>
 
@@ -2187,7 +2187,7 @@ allow-update { key host1-host2. ;};
           the TSIG extended error code set to BADTIME, and the time values
           will be adjusted so that the response can be successfully
           verified. In any of these cases, the message's rcode is set to
-          NOTAUTH (not authoritative).
+          NOTAUTH (not authenticated).
         </para>
 
       </sect2>
@@ -3954,7 +3954,7 @@ channel null {
             special
             property that it only produces output when the server's debug
             level is
-            nonzero.  It normally writes to a file <filename>named.run</filename>
+            nonzero.  It normally writes to a file called <filename>named.run</filename>
             in the server's working directory.
           </para>
 
@@ -4661,7 +4661,7 @@ digits</varname>" + "<varname>tkey-domain</varname>". In most cases,
                 If not specified, the default is <filename>named.stats</filename> in the
                 server's current directory.  The format of the file is
                 described
-                in <xref linkend="statsfile"/>
+                in <xref linkend="statsfile"/>.
               </para>
             </listitem>
           </varlistentry>
@@ -5289,7 +5289,7 @@ options {
                 <para>
                   See the description of
                   <command>provide-ixfr</command> in
-                  <xref linkend="server_statement_definition_and_usage"/>
+                  <xref linkend="server_statement_definition_and_usage"/>.
                 </para>
               </listitem>
             </varlistentry>
@@ -5300,7 +5300,7 @@ options {
                 <para>
                   See the description of
                   <command>request-ixfr</command> in
-                  <xref linkend="server_statement_definition_and_usage"/>
+                  <xref linkend="server_statement_definition_and_usage"/>.
                 </para>
               </listitem>
             </varlistentry>
@@ -5639,7 +5639,8 @@ options {
                <para>
                  When returning authoritative negative responses to
                  SOA queries set the TTL of the SOA recored returned in
-                 the authority section to zero.  Default yes.
+                 the authority section to zero.
+                 The default is <command>yes</command>.
                </para>
              </listitem>
            </varlistentry>
@@ -5649,7 +5650,8 @@ options {
              <listitem>
                <para>
                  When caching a negative response to a SOA query
-                 set the TTL to zero.  Default no.
+                 set the TTL to zero.
+                 The default is <command>no</command>.
                </para>
              </listitem>
            </varlistentry>
@@ -5663,7 +5665,8 @@ options {
                  the DNSKEY RR to determine if this key should be
                  used to generate the RRSIG.  This flag is ignored
                  if there are not DNSKEY RRs both with and without
-                 a KSK.  Default yes.
+                 a KSK.
+                 The default is <command>yes</command>.
                </para>
              </listitem>
            </varlistentry>
@@ -6204,7 +6207,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
                  only supported by relatively new slave servers,
                   such as <acronym>BIND</acronym> 9, <acronym>BIND</acronym>
                  8.x and <acronym>BIND</acronym> 4.9.5 onwards.
-                 The <command>many-answers</command> format also supported by
+                 The <command>many-answers</command> format is also supported by
                  recent Microsoft Windows nameservers.
                  The default is <command>many-answers</command>.
                  <command>transfer-format</command> may be overridden on a
@@ -6417,7 +6420,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
             uses the limit
             that was in force when the server was started. See the description
             of
-            <command>size_spec</command> in <xref linkend="configuration_file_elements"/>.
+            <command> issize_spec</command> in <xref linkend="configuration_file_elements"/>.
           </para>
 
           <para>
@@ -6978,8 +6981,8 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
             <varlistentry>
               <term><command>max-cache-ttl</command></term>
               <listitem>
-                <para><command>max-cache-ttl</command>
-                 sets the maximum time for which the server will
+                <para>
+                 Sets the maximum time for which the server will
                   cache ordinary (positive) answers. The default is
                   one week (7 days).
                 </para>
@@ -6997,7 +7000,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
                 </para>
                 <note>
                   <simpara>
-                    Not implemented in <acronym>BIND</acronym>9.
+                    Not implemented in <acronym>BIND</acronym> 9.
                   </simpara>
                 </note>
               </listitem>
@@ -7083,7 +7086,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
            <varlistentry>
              <term><command>masterfile-format</command></term>
              <listitem>
-               <para><command>masterfile-format</command> specifies
+               <para>Specifies
                  the file format of zone files (see
                  <xref linkend="zonefile_format"/>).
                  The default value is <constant>text</constant>, which is the
@@ -7114,8 +7117,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
              <term><command>clients-per-query</command></term>
              <term><command>max-clients-per-query</command></term>
               <listitem>
-               <para><command>clients-per-query</command>
-                 and <command>max-clients-per-query</command> set the
+               <para>These set the
                  initial value (minimum) and maximum number of recursive
                  simultanious clients for any given query
                  (&lt;qname,qtype,qclass&gt;) that the server will accept
@@ -7141,7 +7143,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
                <para>
                  If <command>max-clients-per-query</command> is set to zero
                  then there is no upper bound other than imposed by
-                 <command>recurive-clients</command>.
+                 <command>recursive-clients</command>.
                </para>
               </listitem>
            </varlistentry>
@@ -7198,7 +7200,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
                   with type <command>TXT</command>, class <command>CHAOS</command>.
                   This defaults to the hostname of the machine hosting the
                   name server as
-                  found by gethostname().  The primary purpose of such queries
+                  found by the gethostname() function.  The primary purpose of such queries
                   is to
                   identify which of a group of anycast servers is actually
                   answering your queries.  Specifying <command>hostname none;</command>
@@ -7219,7 +7221,7 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
                   answering your queries.  Specifying <command>server-id none;</command>
                   disables processing of the queries.
                   Specifying <command>server-id hostname;</command> will cause named to
-                  use the hostname as found by gethostname().
+                  use the hostname as found by the gethostname() function.
                   The default <command>server-id</command> is <command>none</command>.
                 </para>
               </listitem>
@@ -7285,8 +7287,10 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
            views of class IN.  Disabled empty zones are only inherited
            from options if there are no disabled empty zones specified
            at the view level.  To override the options list of disabled
-           zones you can disable the root zone at the view level
-           (disable-empty-zone ".";).
+           zones you can disable the root zone at the view level, for example:
+<programlisting>
+           disable-empty-zone ".";
+</programlisting>
          </para>
          <para>
            If you are using the address ranges covered here you should
@@ -7357,8 +7361,13 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
             generated by <acronym>BIND</acronym> 8.
           </para>
           <para>
-            The statistics dump begins with the line <command>+++ Statistics Dump
-+++ (973798949)</command>, where the number in parentheses is a standard
+            The statistics dump begins with a line, like:
+         </para>
+          <para>
+           <command>+++ Statistics Dump +++ (973798949)</command>
+         </para>
+         <para>
+           The number in parentheses is a standard
             Unix-style timestamp, measured as seconds since January 1, 1970.
             Following
             that line are a series of lines containing a counter type, the
@@ -7368,9 +7377,14 @@ query-source-v6 address * port *;
             the entire server.
             Lines with a zone and view name for the given view and zone (the
             view name is
-            omitted for the default view).  The statistics dump ends
-            with the line <command>--- Statistics Dump --- (973798949)</command>, where the
-            number is identical to the number in the beginning line.
+            omitted for the default view).
+         </para>
+         <para>
+           The statistics dump ends with the line where the
+            number is identical to the number in the beginning line; for example:
+          </para>
+          <para>
+           <command>--- Statistics Dump --- (973798949)</command>
           </para>
           <para>
             The following statistics counters are maintained:
@@ -8353,23 +8367,12 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
 
             <variablelist>
 
-              <varlistentry>
-                <term><command>journal</command></term>
-                <listitem>
-                  <para>
-                    Allow the default journal's file name to be overridden.
-                    The default is the zone's file with "<filename>.jnl</filename>" appended.
-                    This is applicable to <command>master</command> and <command>slave</command> zones.
-                  </para>
-                </listitem>
-              </varlistentry>
-
               <varlistentry>
                 <term><command>allow-notify</command></term>
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>allow-notify</command> in <xref linkend="access_control"/>
+                    <command>allow-notify</command> in <xref linkend="access_control"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8379,7 +8382,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>allow-query</command> in <xref linkend="access_control"/>
+                    <command>allow-query</command> in <xref linkend="access_control"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8626,6 +8629,17 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
 
+              <varlistentry>
+                <term><command>journal</command></term>
+                <listitem>
+                  <para>
+                    Allow the default journal's file name to be overridden.
+                    The default is the zone's file with "<filename>.jnl</filename>" appended.
+                    This is applicable to <command>master</command> and <command>slave</command> zones.
+                  </para>
+                </listitem>
+              </varlistentry>
+
               <varlistentry>
                 <term><command>max-transfer-time-in</command></term>
                 <listitem>
@@ -8718,7 +8732,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8728,7 +8742,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>transfer-source-v6</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>transfer-source-v6</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8738,7 +8752,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>alt-transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>alt-transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8748,7 +8762,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>alt-transfer-source-v6</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>alt-transfer-source-v6</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8758,7 +8772,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>use-alt-transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>use-alt-transfer-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8769,7 +8783,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>notify-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>
+                    <command>notify-source</command> in <xref linkend="zone_transfers"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -8811,7 +8825,7 @@ zone <replaceable>zone_name</replaceable> <optional><replaceable>class</replacea
                 <listitem>
                   <para>
                     See the description of
-                    <command>key-directory</command> in <xref linkend="options"/>
+                    <command>key-directory</command> in <xref linkend="options"/>.
                   </para>
                 </listitem>
               </varlistentry>
@@ -10400,10 +10414,10 @@ $GENERATE 1-127 $ CNAME $.0</programlisting>
                       <command>{</command> immediately following the
                       <command>$</command> as
                       <command>${offset[,width[,base]]}</command>.
-                      e.g. <command>${-20,3,d}</command> which
+                      For example, <command>${-20,3,d}</command>
                       subtracts 20 from the current value, prints the
                       result as a decimal in a zero padded field of
-                      with 3.
+                      width 3.
 
                      Available output forms are decimal
                       (<command>d</command>), octal
@@ -10417,7 +10431,7 @@ $GENERATE 1-127 $ CNAME $.0</programlisting>
                     </para>
                     <para>
                       For compatibility with earlier versions <command>$$</command> is still
-                      recognized a indicating a literal $ in the output.
+                      recognized as indicating a literal $ in the output.
                     </para>
                   </entry>
                 </row>
@@ -10426,8 +10440,8 @@ $GENERATE 1-127 $ CNAME $.0</programlisting>
                     <para><command>ttl</command></para>
                   </entry>
                   <entry colname="2">
-                    <para><command>ttl</command>
-                     specifies the ttl of the generated records. If
+                    <para>
+                     Specifies the time-to-live of the generated records. If
                       not specified this will be inherited using the
                       normal ttl inheritance rules.
                     </para>
@@ -10442,8 +10456,8 @@ $GENERATE 1-127 $ CNAME $.0</programlisting>
                     <para><command>class</command></para>
                   </entry>
                   <entry colname="2">
-                    <para><command>class</command>
-                     specifies the class of the generated records.
+                    <para>
+                     Specifies the class of the generated records.
                       This must match the zone class if it is
                       specified.
                     </para>
@@ -10470,7 +10484,7 @@ $GENERATE 1-127 $ CNAME $.0</programlisting>
                   </entry>
                   <entry colname="2">
                     <para>
-                      rhs is a domain name. It is processed
+                      A domain name. It is processed
                       similarly to lhs.
                     </para>
                   </entry>
@@ -10563,6 +10577,7 @@ acl bogusnets {
        0.0.0.0/8; 1.0.0.0/8; 2.0.0.0/8; 192.0.2.0/24; 224.0.0.0/3;
        10.0.0.0/8; 172.16.0.0/12; 192.168.0.0/16;
 };
+
 // Set up an ACL called our-nets. Replace this with the real IP numbers.
 acl our-nets { x.x.x.x/24; x.x.x.x/21; };
 options {
@@ -10574,6 +10589,7 @@ options {
   blackhole { bogusnets; };
   ...
 };
+
 zone "example.com" {
   type master;
   file "m/example.com";
@@ -10621,7 +10637,7 @@ zone "example.com" {
           <title>The <command>chroot</command> Environment</title>
 
           <para>
-            In order for a <command>chroot()</command> environment
+            In order for a <command>chroot</command> environment
             to
             work properly in a particular directory
             (for example, <filename>/var/named</filename>),
@@ -10641,7 +10657,7 @@ zone "example.com" {
             to set up things like
             <filename>/dev/zero</filename>,
             <filename>/dev/random</filename>,
-            <filename>/dev/log</filename>, and/or
+            <filename>/dev/log</filename>, and
             <filename>/etc/localtime</filename>.
           </para>
         </sect2>
@@ -10827,7 +10843,10 @@ zone "example.com" {
             under
             a grant from the US Defense Advanced Research Projects
             Administration
-            (DARPA). Versions of <acronym>BIND</acronym> through
+            (DARPA).
+          </para>
+          <para>
+           Versions of <acronym>BIND</acronym> through
             4.8.3 were maintained by the Computer
             Systems Research Group (CSRG) at UC Berkeley. Douglas Terry, Mark
             Painter, David Riggle and Songnian Zhou made up the initial <acronym>BIND</acronym>
@@ -11059,13 +11078,13 @@ zone "example.com" {
               </biblioentry>
              <biblioentry>
                 <abbrev>RFC2671</abbrev>
-                <title>Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS0)</title>
                 <authorgroup>
                   <author>
                     <firstname>P.</firstname>
                     <surname>Vixie</surname>
                   </author>
                 </authorgroup>
+                <title>Extension Mechanisms for DNS (EDNS0)</title>
                 <pubdate>August 1997</pubdate>
              </biblioentry>
              <biblioentry>
@@ -12206,6 +12225,7 @@ zone "example.com" {
       <xi:include href="../../bin/check/named-checkconf.docbook"/>
       <xi:include href="../../bin/check/named-checkzone.docbook"/>
       <xi:include href="../../bin/named/named.docbook"/>
+      <!-- named.conf.docbook and others? -->
       <!-- nsupdate gives db2latex indigestion, markup problems? -->
       <xi:include href="../../bin/rndc/rndc.docbook"/>
       <xi:include href="../../bin/rndc/rndc.conf.docbook"/>