Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.29.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.29.rst
index 0d4a416c33d90b7afb5adf9a0052472397aecf15..289586659dceb40d6948f28e7dcccdc1aaaee0f9 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.29.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.29.rst
@@ -15,5 +15,6 @@ Notes for BIND 9.16.29
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- CDS and CDNSKEY DELETE records are removed from the zone when configured with
-  'auto-dnssec maintain;'. This has been fixed. :gl:`#2931`.
+- Previously, CDS and CDNSKEY DELETE records were removed from the zone
+  when configured with the ``auto-dnssec maintain;`` option. This has
+  been fixed. :gl:`#2931`