Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.29.xml b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.29.xml
index 9daf8443259bd891c900d7c92aec5270f55e4b56..c87f8963232ecd6547c7a4a86a04f39524fb3464 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.29.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.29.xml
@@ -65,8 +65,10 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          An invalid direction field (not one of 'N'/'S' or 'E'/'W')
-          in a LOC record triggered an INSIST failure. [GL #2499]
+          An invalid direction field (not one of <command>N</command>,
+          <command>S</command>, <command>E</command>, <command>W</command>) in a
+          LOC record resulted in an INSIST failure when a zone file containing
+          such a record was loaded. [GL #2499]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>