Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries

diff --git a/CHANGES b/CHANGES
index a57db6aaed5d3a0455ed2e6000b6569a2fb56974..b8c7db017e0efc15cd6738ba899bce5c5218b08f 100644 (file)
--- a/CHANGES
+++ b/CHANGES
@@ -1,11 +1,10 @@
 5408.  [protocol]      Print Extended DNS Errors if present in OPT record.
                        [GL #1835]
 
-5407.  [func]          The zone timers are now exported to the statistics
-                       channel.  Thanks to Paul Frieden, Verizon Media.
-                       [GL #1232]
+5407.  [func]          Zone timers are now exported via statistics channel.
+                       Thanks to Paul Frieden, Verizon Media. [GL #1232]
 
-5406.  [func]          Added a new logging category "rpz-passthru". It allows
+5406.  [func]          Added a new logging category, "rpz-passthru". It allows
                        RPZ passthru actions to be logged into a separate
                        channel. [GL #54]
 
@@ -17,12 +16,12 @@
                        success if errors were found in one view but not in a
                        subsequent one. [GL #1807]
 
-5403.  [func]          Don't set udp recv/send buffer sizes, sockets will
-                       use system defaults. [GL #1713]
+5403.  [func]          Do not set UDP receive/send buffer sizes - use system
+                       defaults. [GL #1713]
 
-5402.  [bug]           Enable SO_REUSEADDR on all platforms, and either
-                       SO_REUSEPORT_LB on FreeBSD, or SO_REUSEPORT on Linux.
-                       [GL !3365]
+5402.  [bug]           On FreeBSD, use SO_REUSEPORT_LB instead of SO_REUSEPORT.
+                       Enable use of SO_REUSEADDR on all platforms which
+                       support it. [GL !3365]
 
 5401.  [bug]           The number of input queues allocated during dnstap
                        initialization was too low, which could prevent some
@@ -34,53 +33,57 @@
 5399.  [func]          Add engine support to OpenSSL ECDSA implementation.
                        [GL #1534]
 
-5398.  [bug]           Named could fail to restart if a zone added with
-                       'rndc addzone' contained a double quote (\") in
-                       its name.  [GL #1695]
+5398.  [bug]           Named could fail to restart if a zone with a double
+                       quote (") in its name was added with 'rndc addzone'.
+                       [GL #1695]
 
 5397.  [func]          Update PKCS#11 EdDSA implementation to PKCS#11 v3.0.
                        Thanks to Aaron Thompson. [GL !3326]
 
-5396.  [func]          Use UV_UDP_RECVMMSG flag to enable recvmmsg support in
-                       libuv >= 1.37. [GL #1797]
+5396.  [func]          When necessary (i.e. in libuv >= 1.37), use the
+                       UV_UDP_RECVMMSG flag to enable recvmmsg() support in
+                       libuv. [GL #1797]
 
 5395.  [placeholder]
 
-5394.  [cleanup]       Don't change effective uid/gid in named_os_openfile()
-                       if named is already running under specified uid/gid.
-                       [GL #1042] [GL #1090]
+5394.  [cleanup]       Named formerly attempted to change the effective UID and
+                       GID in named_os_openfile(), which could trigger a
+                       spurious log message if they were already set to the
+                       desired values. This has been fixed. [GL #1042]
+                       [GL #1090]
 
-5393.  [cleanup]       Unused or redundant APIs were removed from libirs.
+5393.  [cleanup]       Unused and/or redundant APIs were removed from libirs.
                        [GL #1758]
 
 5392.  [bug]           It was possible for named to crash during shutdown
                        or reconfiguration if an RPZ zone was still being
                        updated. [GL #1779]
 
-5391.  [func]          The BIND 9 build system has been changed to use the
-                       usual stack of autoconf+automake+libtool.  If building
-                       from the git repository run "autoreconf -fi" first.
+5391.  [func]          The BIND 9 build system has been changed to use a
+                       typical autoconf+automake+libtool stack. When building
+                       from the Git repository, run "autoreconf -fi" first.
                        [GL #4]
 
 5390.  [placeholder]
 
-5389.  [bug]           Finish the PKCS#11 code cleanup, fix couple of smaller
+5389.  [bug]           Finish PKCS#11 code cleanup, fix a couple of smaller
                        bugs and use PKCS#11 v3.0 EdDSA macros and constants.
                        Thanks to Aaron Thompson. [GL !3391]
 
-5388.  [func]          Reject AXFR streams where the message id is not
+5388.  [func]          Reject AXFR streams where the message ID is not
                        consistent. [GL #1674]
 
 5387.  [placeholder]
 
-5386.  [cleanup]       Address Coverity warnings in keymgr.c [GL #1737]
+5386.  [cleanup]       Address Coverity warnings in lib/dns/keymgr.c.
+                       [GL #1737]
 
 5385.  [func]          Make ISC rwlock implementation the default again.
                        [GL #1753]
 
-5384.  [bug]           With dnssec-policy, inline-signing was implicitly set
-                       to yes.  Change and only set inline-signing to yes
-                       if the zone is not dynamic. [GL #1709]
+5384.  [bug]           With "dnssec-policy" in effect, "inline-signing" was
+                       implicitly set to "yes". Now "inline-signing" is only
+                       set to "yes" if the zone is not dynamic. [GL #1709]
 
        --- 9.17.1 released ---