Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries

diff --git a/CHANGES b/CHANGES
index 8812f20105fcec4f26e2a04c3a75e90748289191..578081f860fd9d59fb28909116b6d19320b7a829 100644 (file)
--- a/CHANGES
+++ b/CHANGES
@@ -1,6 +1,7 @@
 5438.  [bug]           Fix a race in TCP accepting code. [GL #1930]
 
-5437.  [bug]           Fix a data race in resolver log_formerr. [GL #1808]
+5437.  [bug]           Fix a data race in lib/dns/resolver.c:log_formerr().
+                       [GL #1808]
 
 5436.  [security]      It was possible to trigger an INSIST when determining
                        whether a record would fit into a TCP message buffer.
@@ -18,42 +19,42 @@
                        master files. Log but otherwise ignore attempts to
                        add DS records at the zone apex via UPDATE. [GL #1798]
 
-5430.  [doc]           Update docs - with netmgr we're creating separate
-                       socket for each IPv6 interface, just as with IPv4.
+5430.  [doc]           Update docs - with netmgr, a separate listening socket
+                       is created for each IPv6 interface (just as with IPv4).
                        [GL #1782]
 
-5428.  [bug]           Cleanup GSSAPI resources in nsupdate only after taskmgr
+5428.  [bug]           Clean up GSSAPI resources in nsupdate only after taskmgr
                        has been destroyed. Thanks to Petr Menšík. [GL !3316]
 
-5426.  [bug]           Don't fail when setting SO_INCOMING_CPU on the socket
+5426.  [bug]           Don't abort() when setting SO_INCOMING_CPU on the socket
                        fails. [GL #1911]
 
-5425.  [func]          The default value of "max-stale-ttl" has been change
+5425.  [func]          The default value of "max-stale-ttl" has been changed
                        from 1 week to 12 hours. [GL #1877]
 
-5424.  [bug]           With kasp, when creating a successor key, the goal
+5424.  [bug]           With KASP, when creating a successor key, the "goal"
                        state of the current active key (predecessor) was not
-                       changed and thus was never is removed from the zone.
-                       [GL #1846]
+                       changed and thus never removed from the zone. [GL #1846]
 
-5423.  [bug]           Fix a bug in keymgr_key_has_successor: it would
-                       return a false positive if any other key in the
-                       keyring has a successor. [GL #1845]
+5423.  [bug]           Fix a bug in keymgr_key_has_successor(): it incorrectly
+                       returned true if any other key in the keyring had a
+                       successor. [GL #1845]
 
-5422.  [bug]           When using dnssec-policy, print correct keytiming
+5422.  [bug]           When using dnssec-policy, print correct key timing
                        metadata. [GL #1843]
 
-5421.  [bug]           Fixed a race that could cause named to crash when
-                       looking up the nodename of an RBT node if the tree
-                       was modified. [GL #1857]
+5421.  [bug]           Fix a race that could cause named to crash when looking
+                       up the nodename of an RBT node if the tree was modified.
+                       [GL #1857]
 
-5420.  [bug]           Add missing isc_{mutex,conditional}_destroy calls
+5420.  [bug]           Add missing isc_{mutex,conditional}_destroy() calls
                        that caused a memory leak on FreeBSD. [GL #1893]
 
-5418.  [bug]           delv failed to parse deprecated trusted-keys style
+5418.  [bug]           delv failed to parse deprecated trusted-keys-style
                        trust anchors. [GL #1860]
 
-5416.  [bug]           Fix a lock order inversion in unix/socket.c. [GL #1859]
+5416.  [bug]           Fix a lock order inversion in lib/isc/unix/socket.c.
+                       [GL #1859]
 
 5415.  [test]          Address race in dnssec system test that led to
                        test failures. [GL #1852]
@@ -65,28 +66,27 @@
 5413.  [test]          Address race in autosign system test that led to
                        test failures. [GL #1852]
 
-5412.  [bug]           'provide-ixfr no;' fail to return up-to-date responses
+5412.  [bug]           'provide-ixfr no;' failed to return up-to-date responses
                        when the serial was greater than or equal to the
                        current serial. [GL #1714]
 
-5411.  [cleanup]       Refactoring of TCP accept code to use a single accept()
-                       and pass the accepted socket to child threads for
-                       processing. [GL !3320]
+5411.  [cleanup]       TCP accept code has been refactored to use a single
+                       accept() and pass the accepted socket to child threads
+                       for processing. [GL !3320]
 
-5409.  [performance]   When looking up NSEC3 data in a zone database, skip
-                       the check for empty non-terminal nodes; the NSEC3
-                       tree doesn't have any. [GL #1834]
+5409.  [performance]   When looking up NSEC3 data in a zone database, skip the
+                       check for empty non-terminal nodes; the NSEC3 tree does
+                       not have any. [GL #1834]
 
 5408.  [protocol]      Print Extended DNS Errors if present in OPT record.
                        [GL #1835]
 
-5407.  [func]          The zone timers are now exported to the statistics
-                       channel.  Thanks to Paul Frieden, Verizon Media.
-                       [GL #1232]
+5407.  [func]          Zone timers are now exported via statistics channel.
+                       Thanks to Paul Frieden, Verizon Media. [GL #1232]
 
-5405.  [bug]           'named-checkconf -p' could include spurious text
-                       in server-addresses statements due to an uninitialized
-                       DSCP value. [GL #1812]
+5405.  [bug]           'named-checkconf -p' could include spurious text in
+                       server-addresses statements due to an uninitialized DSCP
+                       value. [GL #1812]
 
        --- 9.16.3 released ---