Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries

diff --git a/CHANGES b/CHANGES
index a00e42d39ad68f837edfa4bf025ce8e1f2c7e83f..0876663520100ecf5c3b6e33fe4e548a708ac137 100644 (file)
--- a/CHANGES
+++ b/CHANGES
@@ -2,19 +2,18 @@
                        by a data race between zone_maintenance() and
                        dns_zone_setview_helper(). [GL #1627]
 
-5455.  [bug]           `named` could crash when cleaning dead nodes
-                       in lib/dns/rbtdb.c that have been reused meanwhile.
-                       [GL #1968]
+5455.  [bug]           named could crash when cleaning dead nodes in
+                       lib/dns/rbtdb.c that were being reused. [GL #1968]
 
-5454.  [bug]           Address a startup crash happening when server is
-                       under load and root zone is not yet loaded. [GL #1862]
+5454.  [bug]           Address a startup crash that occurred when the server
+                       was under load and the root zone had not yet been
+                       loaded. [GL #1862]
 
-5453.  [bug]           `named` would crash on shutdown when new `rndc`
-                       connection is received at the same time as
-                       shutting down. [GL #1747]
+5453.  [bug]           named crashed on shutdown when a new rndc connection was
+                       received during shutdown. [GL #1747]
 
-5452.  [bug]           The "blackhole" ACL was accidentally disabled with
-                       respect to client queries. [GL #1936]
+5452.  [bug]           The "blackhole" ACL was accidentally disabled for client
+                       queries. [GL #1936]
 
 5451.  [func]          Add 'rndc dnssec -status' command. [GL #1612]
 
@@ -30,24 +29,24 @@
 
 5446.  [bug]           The validator could fail to accept a properly signed
                        RRset if an unsupported algorithm appeared earlier in
-                       the DNSKEY RRset than a supported algorithm.  It could
+                       the DNSKEY RRset than a supported algorithm. It could
                        also stop if it detected a malformed public key.
                        [GL #1689]
 
-5444.  [bug]           'rndc dnstap -roll <value>' was not limiting the
-                       number of saved files to <value>. [GL !3728]
+5444.  [bug]           'rndc dnstap -roll <value>' did not limit the number of
+                       saved files to <value>. [GL !3728]
 
 5443.  [bug]           The "primary" and "secondary" keywords, when used
                        as parameters for "check-names", were not
                        processed correctly and were being ignored. [GL #1949]
 
-5441.  [bug]           ${LMDB_CFLAGS} missing from make/includes.in
+5441.  [bug]           ${LMDB_CFLAGS} was missing from make/includes.in.
                        [GL #1955]
 
 5440.  [test]          Properly handle missing kyua. [GL #1950]
 
-5439.  [bug]           The dsset returned by dns_keynode_dsset() was not
-                       thread safe. [GL #1926]
+5439.  [bug]           The DS RRset returned by dns_keynode_dsset() was used in
+                       a non-thread-safe manner. [GL #1926]
 
        --- 9.16.4 released ---