Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.30.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.30.rst
index 0ed5b5055a8dac7896e3c6f640ce697e4ca1a799..eab5ff1e216a33a0d5e2924a1c64c73084f77807 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.30.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.30.rst
@@ -15,9 +15,10 @@ Notes for BIND 9.16.30
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Key files were updated every time the ``dnssec-policy`` key manager ran,
-  whether the metadata has changed or not. BIND now checks if changes were
-  applied before writing out the key files. :gl:`#3302`.
+- Key files were updated every time the ``dnssec-policy`` key manager
+  ran, whether the metadata had changed or not. :iscman:`named` now
+  checks whether changes were applied before writing out the key files.
+  :gl:`#3302`
 
 - DNSSEC-signed catalog zones were not being processed correctly. This
-  has been fixed. :gl:`#3380`.
+  has been fixed. :gl:`#3380`