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-<p>Paytone One is a sans serif typeface developed for use a display and headlining webfont on modern webpages.</p> <p>The face has a slight casual appearance with ample round bowls. The slanted stroke terminals add some visual play to the overall appearance of the font.</p>
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-<p>Updated February 2023 to v1.002: Expanded to GF Plus encoding and revised outlines, Vietnamese diacritics, spacing, kerning and outlines.</p>
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-<p>To contribute, see <a href="https://github.com/googlefonts/paytoneFont">github.com/googlefonts/paytoneFont</a>.</p>
+<p>Paytone One is a sans-serif font designed for use as a display and headline font on modern websites.</p>
+<p>It has a casual appearance with round bowls and slanted stroke terminals that add visual interest.</p>
+<p>February 2023: The font has been updated to v1.002 and now includes GF Plus encoding, revised outlines, Vietnamese diacritics, improved spacing and kerning.</p>
+<p>To contribute, visit the Paytone One repository on Github: <a href="https://github.com/googlefonts/paytoneFont">https://github.com/googlefonts/paytoneFont</a>.</p>