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 <p>
- Graduate is a high quality example of the classic college block style of lettering used across very campus in the USA.
+"Graduate" showcases a high-quality rendition of the classic college block style of lettering commonly seen across campuses throughout the USA.
 </p>
 
 <p>
- To contribute, see <a href="https://github.com/etunni/graduate">github.com/etunni/graduate</a>.
+To contribute, visit <a href="https://github.com/etunni/graduate">github.com/etunni/graduate</a>.
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