From: Evan Hunt <each@isc.org>
Date: Fri, 21 Feb 2014 16:28:25 +0000 (-0800)
Subject: [master] grammar
X-Git-Tag: v9.10.0b1~17
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/gitweb/index.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f0f5f71274bf334fb9aa433ac7a92525833b155f;p=thirdparty%2Fbind9.git

[master] grammar
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diff --git a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
index 505caed939c..77a7342ae03 100644
--- a/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/Bv9ARM-book.xml
@@ -9837,9 +9837,9 @@ deny-answer-aliases { "example.net"; };
 	    DNSSEC requests (DO=1) unless <command>break-dnssec yes</command>
 	    is in use, because the response would depend on whether or not
 	    RRSIG records were found during resolution.
-	    The option can cause appear to rewrite error responses
-	    such as SERVFAIL when no recursion is done to discover problems
-	    at the authoritative server.
+            Using this option can cause error responses such as SERVFAIL to
+            appear to be rewritten, since no recursion is being done to
+            discover problems at the authoritative server.
 	  </para>
 
 	  <para>