Merge pull request #14779 from keszybz/news-v245

diff --cc NEWS
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@@@ -122,13 -118,13 +118,13 @@@ CHANGES WITH 245 in spe
          * Closely related to this, the sd-event.h API gained two new calls
            sd_event_source_send_child_signal() (for sending a signal to a
            watched process) and sd_event_source_get_child_process_own() (for
-           marking a process so that it is killed implicitly whenever the event
-           source watching it is freed).
+           marking a process so that it is killed automatically whenever the
+           event source watching it is freed).
  
 -        * systemd-networkd gained support for configuring Token Buffer Filter
 +        * systemd-networkd gained support for configuring Token Bucket Filter
-           (TBF) parameters in its qdisc configuration support. Similar, support
-           for Stochastic Fairness Queuing (SFQ), Controlled-Delay Active
-           Queue Management (CoDel), Fair Queueing (FQ) has been added.
+           (TBF) parameters in its qdisc configuration support. Similarly,
+           support for Stochastic Fairness Queuing (SFQ), Controlled-Delay
+           Active Queue Management (CoDel), and Fair Queue (FQ) has been added.
  
          * systemd-networkd gained support for Intermediate Functional Block
            (IFB) network devices.
@@@ -145,31 -141,30 +141,30 @@@
  
          * The PrefixRoute= setting in systemd-networkd's [Address] section of
            .network files has been deprecated, and replaced by AddPrefixRoute=,
-           with it's sense inverted.
+           with its sense inverted.
  
          * The Gateway= setting of [Route] sections of .network files gained
 -          support for a special new value "dhcp". If set the configured static
 -          route uses the gateway host configured via DHCP.
 +          support for a special new value "_dhcp". If set, the configured
 +          static route uses the gateway host configured via DHCP.
  
          * A new User= setting has been implemented for the [RoutingPolicyRule]
-           section of .network files for configuring source routing based on UID
+           section of .network files to configure source routing based on UID
            ranges.
  
-         * sd-bus gained a new API call sd_bus_message_sensitive() for marking a
-           D-Bus message object as "sensitive". Objects that are marked that way
-           are erased from memory when they are freed. This concept is intended
-           to be used for messages that contain security sensitive data that
-           should be erased after use. A new flag SD_BUS_VTABLE_SENSITIVE has
-           been introduced as well that allows marking method calls in sd-bus
-           vtables like this, so that this new message flag is implicitly set
-           for incoming and outgoing messages of specific methods.
+         * sd-bus gained a new API call sd_bus_message_sensitive() that marks a
+           D-Bus message object as "sensitive". Those objects are erased from
+           memory when they are freed. This concept is intended to be used for
+           messages that contain security sensitive data. A new flag
+           SD_BUS_VTABLE_SENSITIVE has been introduced as well to mark methods
+           in sd-bus vtables, causing any incoming and outgoing messages of
+           those methods to be implicitly marked as "sensitive".
  
          * sd-bus gained a new API call sd_bus_message_dump() for dumping the
-           contents of a message (or parts thereof) onto standard output, for
+           contents of a message (or parts thereof) to standard output for
            debugging purposes.
  
-         * systemd-sysusers gained support for creating users with primary
-           groups named differently than the user itself.
+         * systemd-sysusers gained support for creating users with the primary
+           group named differently than the user.
  
          * systemd-resolved's DNS-over-TLS support gained SNI validation.