Add some editorial notes for new content

Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>

diff --git a/src/templates/about.html b/src/templates/about.html
index 7893fff9263364f4fff3789290225cb609094922..09bd673dc8a365921794ce63579c2e5a6cb65a44 100644 (file)
--- a/src/templates/about.html
+++ b/src/templates/about.html
@@ -5,21 +5,29 @@
 {% block container %}
        <div class="header">
                <div class="container">
-                       <h1>{{ _("About") }}</h1>
+                       <h1>{{ _("About IPFire") }}</h1>
 
                        <p class="text-muted">
-                               Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod
-                               tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
-                               Viverra accumsan in nisl nisi scelerisque eu ultrices.
-                               Semper auctor neque vitae tempus quam pellentesque nec.
-                               Platea dictumst quisque sagittis purus sit amet.
+                               IPFire is a dedicated firewall which will protect your network
+                               from threats from the Internet.
+
+                               Developed by an independent community of experts,
+                               it is a state-the-art product that trusted by thousands?
                        </p>
+
+                       <!--
+                               This should be the executive summary (elevator pitch)
+                               and tell people what IPFire is and invite them to use it.
+                       -->
                </div>
        </div>
 
        <div class="container">
                <section>
-                       <h3>{{ _("Features") }}</h3>
+                       <h3>{{ _("Top Features") }}</h3>
+
+                       <!-- this should talk more about what IPFire can do instead of how it does it -->
+                       <!-- brief and to the point. longer technical stuff goes below -->
 
                        <div class="row">
                                <div class="col-12 col-lg-4">

diff --git a/src/templates/download/release.html b/src/templates/download/release.html
index e01f04edf8e5b063cebe1233db8192916cab33a0..dba92674e0e1eabfa21db78b5734093998b15918 100644 (file)
--- a/src/templates/download/release.html
+++ b/src/templates/download/release.html
@@ -87,6 +87,8 @@
                </div>
        </section>
 
+       <!-- Upgrade instructions -->
+
        <div class="container">
                <section>
                        <p>