]> git.ipfire.org Git - ipfire.org.git/commitdiff
CeBIT page: Some text improvements by "wayne".
authorMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Fri, 25 Dec 2009 11:34:08 +0000 (12:34 +0100)
committerMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Fri, 25 Dec 2009 11:34:08 +0000 (12:34 +0100)
www/pages/static/cebit.xml

index 7e5aeccb7fa6640c0e3b6c6d7892cdb17a834f9d..f8b7369fb2f1596fbb07b11b6b5e40e41727b1c5 100644 (file)
                        </Content>
 
                        <Content lang="en"><![CDATA[
-                                       In 2010, the <strong>CeBIT</strong> will take place from march 2nd until march 6th in Hannover, Germany.
-                                       The special thing about the event next year is: <strong>IPFire</strong> will take part in with a small stand
-                                       within the <strong>OpenSource forum</strong>.
+                                       <strong>CeBIT</strong> 2010 will be here soon, beginning March 2nd and lasting until
+                                       March 6th in Hannover, Germany. This year will prove to be a special
+                                       one, as <strong>IPFire</strong> will be represented by its very own booth! 
                                </p>
                                
                                <p>
-                                       First of all, our very special thanks go out to the
-                                       <a href="http://www.linuxnewmedia.de/Produkte/Events" target="_blank">Linux New Media AG</a> and the
+                                       First of all, our very special thanks go out to
+                                       <a href="http://www.linuxnewmedia.de/Produkte/Events" target="_blank">Linux New Media AG</a> and
                                        <a href="http://www.cebit.de/opensource_d" target="_blank">Messegesellschaft</a>,
-                                       who offer a free stands to selected OpenSource projects.
-                                       The CeBIT is the biggest computer- and telecommunications - exhibition in the
-                                       world, so that this is quite a big chance for <strong>IPFire</strong> to become
-                                       well-known, get in touch with users and developers, and possibly find sponsors and forge alliances.
+                                       who offer free booths to selected Open Source
+                                       projects. <strong>CeBIT</strong> (a German acronym for the Center for Office and
+                                       Information Technology) is the biggest computer and telecommunications
+                                       exhibition in the world. This an excellent chance for IPFire to gain
+                                       recognition, get in touch with users and developers, and possibly find
+                                       sponsors and forge alliances. 
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       And: It is a chance for all of you to meet some people of the <strong>IPFire</strong> community
-                                       in person.
+                                       And, it is also a chance for all of you to meet the members of the
+                                       <strong>IPFire</strong> community in person.
                                ]]></Content>
                        <Content lang="de"><![CDATA[
                                        Vom <em>2. bis 6. März 2010</em> findet die <strong>CeBIT</strong> in Hannover statt.
                        </Content>
                </Paragraph>
                <Paragraph>
-                       <Heading lang="en">Please Donate!</Heading>
+                       <Heading lang="en">Your Donations are Needed!</Heading>
                        <Heading lang="de">Spendenaufruf</Heading>
                        
                        <Content lang="en"><![CDATA[
                                        This project is driven and maintained by volunteers in their free time.
-                                       Same to the booth. Even though it is for free there are a lot of things
-                                       to pay like flyers, discs, posters and other merchandising things.
+                                       The same goes to the booth. Even though it is being donated there are
+                                       still many costs associated with running a booth, such as flyers, CDs,
+                                       posters and other merchandise.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       As we want to represent the <strong>IPFire</strong> project as professional
-                                       as possible we need to fundraising. <strong>That's why we request everybody to
-                                       donate a small amount of money.</strong> This is a unique chance to get
-                                       the project better known.
+                                       As we strive to represent <strong>IPFire</strong> as professionally,
+                                       we are asking for some extra help to take advantage o fthis opportunity.
+                                       All we ask is a small donation, as every little bit helps. This is a unique
+                                       opportunity to gain international recognition for the project, so your
+                                       money will be well spent.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       The given money is spend for:
+                                       Materials we will be purchasing:
                                </p>
                                <p>
                                        <ul>
-                                               <li>posters</li>
-                                               <li>flyers</li>
-                                               <li>discs (pressed)</li>
-                                               <li>some t-shirts, etc.</li>
+                                               <li>Posters</li>
+                                               <li>Flyers</li>
+                                               <li>Discs (pressed)</li>
+                                               <li>T-Shirts, etc.</li>
                                        </ul>
                                </p>
                                
                                        <input type="image" src="https://www.paypal.com/de_DE/DE/i/btn/btn_donateCC_LG.gif" border="0" name="submit" alt="PayPal - The safer, easier way to pay online.">
                                        <img alt="" border="0" src="https://www.paypal.com/de_DE/i/scr/pixel.gif" width="1" height="1">
                                </form>
-
                                ]]></Content>
                </Paragraph>