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Text improvements (english).
authorMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Tue, 18 Jan 2011 15:10:36 +0000 (16:10 +0100)
committerMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Tue, 18 Jan 2011 15:10:36 +0000 (16:10 +0100)
Mailed by Wayne Thursby. Thanks Wayne.

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                </p>
        {% else %}
                <p>
-                       <strong>IPFire</strong> is a server distribution with primary task as
-                       a firewall. It also focuses on flexibility and scales very well from small to
-                       middle-sized buisiness networks and home networks.
+                       <strong>IPFire</strong> is a server distribution with intended to use as
+                       a firewall. It focuses on flexibility, and scales from small to
+                       middle sized business networks and home networks.
                </p>
                <p>
-                       Along with this very shrinked and hardened system come lots of addons that
+                       Along with this hardened, minimalist come lots of addons that
                        can be installed with a simple click. That's what makes IPFire different
-                       from other distributions: It is easy to administer and has lots of power
-                       for every challenge there might be.
+                       from other firewall distributions: it is easy to configure for any task,
+                       and easy to administer once it's set up.
                </p>
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                <ul>
                        <li><a href="#concept">{{ _("Concept of the system") }}</a></li>
                        <li><a href="#security">{{ _("Security") }}</a></li>
-                       <li><a href="#pakfire">{{ _("Packet management") }}</a></li>
+                       <li><a href="#pakfire">{{ _("Package management") }}</a></li>
                        <li><a href="#firewall">{{ _("Firewall") }}</a></li>
                        <li><a href="#vpn">{{ _("VPN") }}</a></li>
                        <li><a href="#hardware">{{ _("Hardware") }}</a></li>
                                <p>
                                        The foundation of <strong>IPFire</strong> is the high level of flexibility which lets us
                                        configure different versions of this operating system out of a single base. Beginning with a
-                                       few megabytes small firewall system it is possible to run IPFire as a file server or VPN gateway for
-                                       staff, branches or customers. This is manageable with the package manager that enhances
-                                       the system only if you really want to and makes securtity updates very easy.
+                                       small firewall system of a few megabytes, it is possible to run IPFire as a file server or
+                                       VPN gateway for staff, branches or customers. This modularity means that yor version of
+                                       IPFire runs with exactly what you require and nothing more.
+                                       All features are easily configured with the package manager, which also
+                                       makes updates very easy.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       We believe that this is the best way to provide security to a network. There is no way to give
-                                       out a static appliance because security is not a single thing to install and never touch
-                                       again. It's a kind of process paired with behaviour and restrictions. This plans could be very
-                                       different from company to company and also differ from the place IPFire is installed at.
+                                       We believe that this is the best way to provide security to a network. There is no way to 
+                                       distribute a static appliance because security menas different things to different people,
+                                       and changes over time. Security is more of a process paired with behaviour and restrictions.
+                                       IPFire has been designed to be flexible enough to fit into any existing security architecture.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       <em>Please click through the tabs and take a look at what possibilities IPFire offers for
-                                       your personal concept of network. And don't be scared. We have built-in our own to
-                                       start with...</em>
+                                       <em>Please click through the tabs and take a look at the possibilities IPFire offers for
+                                       your personal concept of network.</em>
+                                       If you're still deciding what that concept is, don't worry. IPFire comes with intelligent
+                                       defaults for settings whereever possible.
                                </p>
                        {% end %}
 
                                </p>
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
-                                       The matter that counts most in the development of IPFire is - of course - security. But
-                                       we don't believe that there is only one single way to achieve security. It is more important
-                                       that every administrator knows about what he is configuring and that he is teached about what
-                                       is right in his special environment.
+                                       The primary objective in the development of IPFire is - of course - security. But it doesn't
+                                       mean there is only one way to achieve security. Rather, it is more important for every
+                                       administrator to understand their environemnt and what security means <em>in that context</em>.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       IPFire is the base of security in the network. It has the power to separate the network into
-                                       smaller parts rated by their security level. That's what makes it more easy to create a custom
-                                       policy for every part. See the firewall tab to learn more about that.
+                                       IPFire is the base of security for a local network. It has the power to segment the network based
+                                       on their required security level. This makes it easy to create custom policies for each segment.
+                                       See the firewall tab for more information.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       Another very important thing the developers focus on is the fast and reliable distribution
-                                       of security updates of the system or its components like the Linux kernel, libraries, etc.
-                                       As IPFire is directly connected to the internet it is a primary target for hackers and bots
-                                       we have to fight against.
+                                       Part of this focus on security involves the fast and reliable distribution of security updates
+                                       of the system and its components. Updates are digitally signed and encrypted, and can be
+                                       automatically installed by the Pakfire, the package manager. Since IPFire is directly
+                                       connected to the Internet it is a primary target for hackers and bots. Pakfire helps
+                                       administrators feel certain they are running the latest security updates and bug fixes.
                                </p>
                        {% end %}
                </div>
                                </ul>
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
-                                       From the technical point of view, IPFire is a very shrinked and hardened firewall system
-                                       which comes with an integrated package manager that is called <a href="/features/pakfire">Pakfire</a>.
-                                       With only a single click you can extend your system to a server that provides services from different
-                                       categories.
+                                       From a technical point of view, IPFire is a minimalistic, hardened firewall system
+                                       which comes with an integrated package manager called Pakfire. With a single click you
+                                       can enhance the base system by providing network services.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       The most interesting addons:
+                                       Some interesting addons:
                                </p>
                                <ul class="list">
                                        <!-- XXX make this right -->
-                                       <li>File services like: Samba and vsftpd</li>
-                                       <li>A collection of command line tools like: tcpdump, nmap and traceroute.</li>
-                                       <li>Asterisk</li>
+                                       <li>File services such as Samba and vsftpd</li>
+                                       <li>Communication Server Asterisk</li>
+                                       <li>A collection of command line tools like tcpdump, nmap and traceroute.</li>
                                        <li><em>and many more...</em></li>
                                </ul>
                        {% end %}
                                </p>
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
-                                       IPFire comes with a SPI (stateful inspection) firewall which is built on top of the
-                                       Linux <a href="http://www.netfilter.org/">netfilter</a>.
+                                       IPFire uses a firewall using Stateful Packet Inspection (SPI) which is built on top of
+                                       <a href="http://www.netfilter.org/">netfilter</a>, the Linux packet filtering framework.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       With the installation of IPFire, the network gets seperated into different parts that
-                                       represent a special kind of computers with their own level of security:
+                                       With the installation of IPFire, the network gets separated into different segments which
+                                       represent a group of computers which share a common security level:
                                </p>
                                <ul class="list">
                                        <li style="color: green;">
-                                               <strong>Green:</strong> The segment of the network which is marked by the colour <em>green</em>,
-                                               which stands for a safe area, is where all client computers get. It is the normal LAN and normally
-                                               wired. Clients can access all other segments without any restriction.
+                                               <strong>Green</strong> represents a safe area. This is where all regular client computers
+                                               reside. is usually comprised of a wired local network. Clients can access all other
+                                               network segments without restriction.
                                        </li>
                                        <li style="color: red;">
-                                               <strong>Red:</strong> The internet as a source of danger gets the colour <em>red</em>.
-                                               No access from the internet is permitted to pass the firewall.
+                                               <strong>Red</strong>,  a color commonly indicating danger, represents the Internet.
+                                               No access from the Internet is permitted to pass the firewall unless specially configured
+                                               by the administrator. 
                                        </li>
                                        <li style="color: darkblue;">
-                                               <strong>Blue:</strong> The wireless LAN is an other source of potential harm. So it is seperated
-                                               and got the colour <em>blue</em> for "air". Clients on this part of the network must be
-                                               allowed explicitely to access the internet.
+                                               <strong>Blue</strong> represents the wireless part of the local network, since it has
+                                               its own unique potential for abuse. The color blue was chosen as it is the color of the
+                                               sky. Clients on this network segment must be explicitly allowed before they may access
+                                               the network.
                                        </li>
                                        <li style="color: orange;">
-                                               <strong>Orange:</strong> If there are any servers that are accessable by the internet, it is
-                                               also possible to take them over. For this case, there is the segment coloured <em>orange</em>
-                                               (some compromise between red and green) so that those machines are not able to harm any
-                                               other segment. This is called demilitarized zone (DMZ).
+                                               <strong>Orange</strong> is commonly referred to as the demilitarized zone (DMZ). Any
+                                               servers which are publicly accessible are separated from the rest of the network to
+                                               limit extent of a security breach.
                                        </li>
                                </ul>
                                <br class="clear" />
                                <p>
-                                       So there is a best place for every machine in the network. All the segments can be activated seperately
-                                       (except green and red are always required).
-                                       <br />
-                                       On top of all of that, there is an <strong>outgoing firewall</strong> for filtering the egress direction.
+                                       This scheme means there is a perfect place for each machine in the network. The various
+                                       segments may be enabled separately depending on requirements. Additionally, the firewall
+                                       can also control outbound Internet access from any segment. This gives the administrator
+                                       ultimate control over how their network can be used.
                                </p>
                        {% end %}
 
                                </p>
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
-                                       IPFire can be enhanced to a VPN (virtual private network) gateway that connects places and
-                                       persons to the local network. This could either be staff, friends and people you want to share
-                                       data with in a secure way but also could be a branch office, important customer or an other
-                                       company you are operating with.
-                               </p>
-                               <p>
-                                       To be able to dock on different technologies IPFire offers these implementations:
+                                       IPFire may be enhanced to include a virtual private network (VPN) gateway which connects
+                                       remote people and places to the local network using an encrypted link. This could be staff,
+                                       friends, or anyone you'd like to share data with in a secure way. Businesses use VPNs to
+                                       connect branch offices, datacenters, corporate partners, and to provide traveling staff
+                                       with a portal into the corporate network.
                                </p>
-                               <ul class="list">
-                                       <li><strong>IPSec</strong> to connect networks side-by-side (also is called net-to-net).</li>
-                                       <li>To connect so called <em>roadwarrior clients</em> there is <strong>OpenVPN</strong>.</li>
-                               </ul>
-                               <!-- XXX there is too less margin on the buttom of this list, so: -->
-                               <br class="clear" />
                                <p>
-                                       Those implementations let IPFire connect to routers or VPN gateways by:
+                                       IPFire uses both the IPSEC and OpenVPN protocols, affording the maximum in flexibility
+                                       when configuring your VPN. These implementations allow IPFire connect to VPN endpoint
+                                       devices by:
                                        <a href="http://www.cisco.com" target="_blank">Cisco</a>,
                                        <a href="http:///www.juniper.net" target="_blank">Juniper</a>,
                                        <a href="http://www.checkpoint.com" target="_blank">Checkpoint</a>,
-                                       other Linux-based implementations and many more...
+                                       NetGear, or any Linux based implementation.
                                </p>
                        {% end %}
                        <p class="links">
                                </p>
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
-                                       Based on a recent version of the Linux kernel 2.6 series, IPFire supports latest hardware
-                                       like 10G network cards and wireless hardware out of the box.
+                                       Based on a recent version of the Linux kernel 2.6 series, IPFire supports the latest hardware
+                                       like 10Gbit network cards and wireless hardware out of the box.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       It is at least a Intel Pentium I compatible CPU (i586) required and we recommend
-                                       approx. 128 MB RAM (or more) and 1GB disk space.
+                                       Requirements are minimal: an Intel Pentium I compatible CPU (i586), 128 MB RAM,
+                                       and 1GB disk space.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       For routing, there are at least 2 network interfaces required.
-                                       Alternatively, a 3G-modem can be used.
+                                       For routing, at least 2 network interfaces are required.
+                                       Alternatively, a 3G modem may be used. 
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       Developers are concerned about keeping the system running on many variations as
-                                       possible what makes IPFire run on cheap hardware as well as running on high
-                                       performance servers.
+                                       The IPFire Developers are concerned with the ability to run IPFire on systems running as many
+                                       variations as possible. This is what helps IPFire run on cheap hardware as well as high
+                                       performance servers. 
                                </p>
                        {% end %}
                        <p class="links">
-                               <a href="http://wiki.ipfire.org/{{ lang }}/hardware/start">{{ _("Hardware section on the wiki") }}</a>
+                               <a href="http://fireinfo.ipfire.org/" target="_blank">{{ _("Fireinfo") }}</a>
+                               &bull;
+                               <a href="http://wiki.ipfire.org/{{ lang }}/hardware/start" target="_blank">{{ _("Hardware section on the wiki") }}</a>
                                &bull;
-                               <a href="http://wiki.ipfire.org/{{ lang }}/hardware/networking">{{ _("Hardware compatibility list") }} ({{ _("networking") }})</a>
+                               <a href="http://wiki.ipfire.org/{{ lang }}/hardware/networking" target="_blank">{{ _("Hardware compatibility list") }} ({{ _("networking") }})</a>
                        </p>
                </div>
                <div id="virtualization">
                        {% else %}
                                <p>
                                        IPFire is licensed under the terms of the <a href="http://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl.html">GNU General
-                                       Public License</a> in version 3. So it is free software.
+                                       Public License</a> in version 3, so it is free software.
                                </p>
                                <p>
-                                       There is the opportunity to make a <a href="/donation">donation</a> to the
-                                       community which is a very important thing for the success of the project.
+                                       The success of the project depends upon <a href="/donation">donations</a>
+                                       to the community.
                                </p>
                                <p>
                                        Free software allows (under the terms of the GPLv3):
                                </p>
                                <ul class="list">
-                                       <li>Free use for unlimited time</li>
-                                       <li>Review of the source code</li>
-                                       <li>Opportunity to take part in and make own improvements</li>
+                                       <li>Free use for an unlimited amount time</li>
+                                       <li>Review of the full source code</li>
+                                       <li>Opportunity to take part in development and make own improvements</li>
                                        <li>Independence from a specific vendor</li>
                                </ul>
                        {% end %}
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 "Open mirror","Mirror öffnen"
 "Virtualization","Virtualisierung"
 "It's free","IPFire ist frei"
-"Packet management","Paketmanagement"
+"Package management","Paketmanagement"
 "Really important guides are:","Empfehlenswerte Artikel sind:"
 "Installation guide","Installationsanleitung"
 "Learn how to start.","Wie fängt man an?"