donate: Update the flow of the second Christmas email

Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>

diff --git a/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.html b/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.html
index b7e5e294f6d8642dcc0bfd18a86e19aeec79d8fb..0d35a1a54f79d15dfe8ea052d4b1db12f0686a1e 100644 (file)
--- a/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.html
+++ b/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.html
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
                        <h1>{{ _("Dear %s,") % account.first_name }}</h1>
 
                        <p>
-                               Even in challenging times, Open Source keeps the world moving!
+                               Even in challenging times, Open Source keeps the world moving.
                        </p>
 
                        <p>
@@ -21,9 +21,13 @@
                        </p>
 
                        <p>
-                               If you can, consider giving a little back this season. Your support helps the people
-                               behind these projects continue their work, keeping software available, secure, and free
-                               for everyone - including those who might otherwise be left behind.
+                               If you can, consider giving a little back this season.
+                       </p>
+
+                       <p>
+                               Your support helps the people behind these projects continue their work,
+                               keeping software available, secure, and free for everyone - including
+                               those who might otherwise be left behind.
                        </p>
 
                        <p>

diff --git a/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.txt b/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.txt
index bb23e53a45c093ecace36e33db939348133b97d9..cd4a712f4a6fb1835db6dcced40fce884ab867c6 100644 (file)
--- a/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.txt
+++ b/src/templates/donate/messages/christmas-2.txt
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ X-Auto-Response-Suppress: OOF
 
 {{ _("Dear %s,") % account.first_name }}
 
-Even in challenging times, Open Source keeps the world moving!
+Even in challenging times, Open Source keeps the world moving.
 
 We know that times are not easy for many. Budgets are tight, priorities are pressing,
 and the world can feel overwhelming.
@@ -15,9 +15,10 @@ Yet there is something that continues to make a difference for everyone, everywh
 Open Source software. Projects like IPFire, and countless others, rely on the dedication
 of people who build, maintain, and improve software for the common good.
 
-If you can, consider giving a little back this season. Your support helps the people
-behind these projects continue their work, keeping software available, secure, and free
-for everyone - including those who might otherwise be left behind.
+If you can, consider giving a little back this season.
+
+Your support helps the people behind these projects continue their work, keeping software
+available, secure, and free for everyone - including those who might otherwise be left behind.
 
 Even a small donation helps: it supports the developers, the communities, and the long-term
 sustainability of the software we all rely on.